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Hamed Bakhsh

Michael LoSasso

American History

November 18, 2018

Hauser, William L. Hauser. “Why America Should Restore the Draft”. Journal of American history, Vol. 44, pg. 181-185, Apr.2005.

Summary

Colonel Gobly proposes a return to the draft within a national service program that would discourage military civil separation and provide political, economic, strategic, and social benefits to the whole nation. He thinks this would be the best route since it would help protect the democracy of the nation.

I support Colonel Gobly’s idea and professor Libert’s article which states that volunteer forces replacing , selective service system enacted by Congress in 1993 , have destroyed American military estrangement on society creating a danger to American democracy.

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