personal statement

I would like to write a personal statement to apply to university to study bacholer in business administration.

two or three paragraphs will work (One Page)

I am a female 24 years old

I received diploma in marketing and diploma in general management from Canada.

(academic language please)

Could you please help me with that?

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Administration Office, Business management

Until I was left in charge of our family business three years ago, I developed the passion for business management and administration. I am a hardworking young person with the right educational background applying to take a bachelor degree in business administration. I have some basic information and concepts in the business arena but am seeking more knowledge which I know a bachelor’s program can be of much help.

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