Abraaj Group of Companies Corporate Risk Management
It appears that you have not gone through the assignment brief and have no understanding and knowledge of the brief Task 1: only part A was partially discussed in your work, part B and C discussion were not clear from your work. The use of sub-headings could have helped you to cover all areas of the questions. You produced irrelevant analysis, not related to the subject matter. (7.5/30) Task 2: your discussions are not clear at all, confusing or paraphrasing problem. The use of sub-tittle could have been of help and should be used in subsequent assignments. (2.5) Task 3: the same comment as above. Irrelevant discussion evidenced in your work throughout your analysis. (2.5/40) Generally, you produced a vague, irrelevant, and incoherent discussion through the research work
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