homework to do

homework to do

here is the work that i have done, I want you to make sure that the grammar is correct and also add like 200 word so that the paper is 1500 words.

 I have attached the way the teacher will grade the paper. please check it, i need to get 100 in this paper
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For the survey of our focus group, we have found very interesting points that make us surprised and aware of the issues that we are studying. Our focus group contains seventeen students from different levels at college (freshmen, sophomore junior, and seniors). 93.75% of our focus group believes that education is a right for all people. People from different financial backgrounds should be able to get access to education and have proximity to various academic resources.88.23% of the students agreed that having more educated people would lead to solving significant issues facing the country since knowledge acquired will enhance creativity hence generation of solutions facing the population. However, it becomes difficult for student, parents, and guardians who are tasked in paying huge amounts of money to universities so that these students can quench their thirst for education. An average of 14 students agreed that they are remitting huge amounts of money to higher institutions of learning leaving them with little for their upkeep.
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