Impact of Malware on an Organization
the work needs to be re-organized, here is the recommended sub-subjects:
Introduction
Organization’s security policy readiness
Identity the elements of a security policy and describe how those elements protect against such an attack
Ransomware attack examples (you need to provide more depth in your responses to show thoroughly understand the concepts. More critical analysis and insight is needed)
Conclusion
You need to address the lesson learned from the examples that you provided in the review of the security policies and the impacts if not implemented.
Examples you provided are not deep. You just give a high level. You need to do more analysis and insights in addition to more original words.
It seems to me that each paragraph goes way from the paragraph before, there is no link its like jumping between subjects. Also, you need to provide more depth in each example as well as the organization’s security policy elements to show thoroughly understand the concepts. More critical analysis and insight is needed throughout the paper. More original thought also needed.
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Introduction
The current digital age has made the management of cyber threat a way of life. Organizations are actively engaged to ensure the security of sensitive data. Ransomware is a computer security attack that prevents or blocks access to the computer system with an intention by the inventor of the malware to be paid money to provide decryption keys of the malware. The attack against an organization may be intended to affect its credibility or shut down critical systems.
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