Personal Statement
This is my Personal statement for my graduate school, I have already Wrote something with exact materials that I need in every paragraph. I want it to be edited and make it look more professional including better word bank. Here is the Outline of what I need in every paragraph and I will upload what I wrote here.
Paragraph 1: Hook, Thesis
Paragraph 2: How i chose mechanical engineering, and what i like about it
Paragraph 3: My personal Experience
Paragraph 4: why i want to continue my path in Engineering
Paragraph 5: Conclusion, rephrase thesis.
I will Provide More information if the Writer need more.
I think everything u should know are on the essay i sent you but ill send you the requirements just in case
The Personal History Statement is required from all applicants. Please note that the Personal History Statement should not duplicate the Statement of Purpose.
Please describe how your personal background and experiences influenced your decision to pursue a graduate degree. In this section, you may also include any relevant information on the following:
- How you have overcome barriers to access higher education
- How you have come to understand the barriers faced by others
- Your academic service to advance equitable access to higher education for women, racial minorities and individuals from other groups that have been historically underrepresented in higher education
- Your research focusing on under served populations or related issues of inequality
- Your leadership among such groups
Personal Statement
Since I was a child, I have always been fascinated by vast activities that can be conducted by various machines, robots, and vehicles. Such an interest emanated from the desire to know how some of the products are made and how they undertake certain activities that would otherwise not be possible for human beings. My interest and curiosity increased over time with a desire to understand the internal functioning of these machines and not just the outward appearance and controls that humans have access to when controlling or manning these machines. As a result, my desire to understand the internal complexities that come into place led me to an enchanted spirit to pursue engineering specifically mechanical engineering.
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