university application essays
I need help with my university essays as soon as possible to submit the application.
I am attaching the work here, I have wrote down everything.
I need help with the sentence structure, grammar, punctuation, logic and fluency of the essays.
remove any repetition, replace words to make it stronger or change the sentence.
for the last essay, if you can combine thoughts or remove unnecessary detail that will still give me the same result go ahead and do it because all what I need for each essay is only 350 word or less.
PLEASE GO AHEAD AND CHANGE IT FROM YOUR SITE, DO NOT GIVE ME IDEAS ON IT LIKE OTHER SITES. ALL WHAT I NEED IS TO CHECK IT AND SUBMIT IT IMMEDIATE AFTER.
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1. Please describe how you have prepared for your intended major, including your readiness to succeed in your upper-division courses once you enroll at the university.
School in San Diego is an exciting journey for me as it opens various doors for gaining a tremendous amount of knowledge and the development of my education. I have learned new experiences from the studying of general education and my major classes. The chemistry lab is a great opportunity which gives me access to work with the chemicals and gains new technical skills. For example, mixing two chemicals then precipitating, followed by precipitation and centrifuge.
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