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Mohammed Badawi
ALI 150-02
Response Essay Final Draft
10/16/18
Steps to Be Kinder
I believe that rudeness or meanness is a serious issue. For a person like me who likes to go out a lot and meet new people would not like facing this issue. I have met some rude people, and it was a bad experience. For example, before school started this morning I went with my friends to six flags, we were six people, but I only knew three of them as close friends. As I said before, I like to make friends and get to know more people, so I was talking to them and trying to open a conversation with one of them. He seemed like he didn’t want to talk to me, he wasn’t interested, and he was on his phone as I was talking to him.
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